It needed work, I knew that. The impetus came from a 55% off coupon at Michaels, probably the only time I shop there.
I decided I needed coloured pencils that were softer than the ones used, so coupon in hand I went ins search of soft leads ...
I found them in a set of Prismacolor Premier pencils ..
Later, after a bit of work I felt that the sketch was indeed better.
I'm happy now
On here it still looks dull but in person it is positively vibrant!